Free writing 1.8.14

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Me and my dad went to get watercress at  a BIG farm. There were lots of eels in the water.

We saw traps for predators as me and my dad walked on a wood track that took us into the middle of a huge duck pond, it was awesome. I'v never been in the middle of a pond that huge! When dad was picking watercress I sneek into a duck shooter place I looked for some gun bullets but I didin't find any. It looked very good to go fishing then I went  back to dad. When dad was finish I had to Carry one full crate of watercress  i nearly fell in the water it was sceery. The wood track was small so you have to keep strait but I kept on wiggling over but lucky did'nt fall in the water. We had to cross two broken wood to cross the river it was like quick sand. Finely we got back it was about 1000 metres my dad said I was like wow! Then I had one giant orange because I was so thirsty.

   

Walt use the description bubble to write better descriptions.

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1.

 

The cone is shining in the sun. 

When you talk in the cone it will make a loud noise.

It is standing on the road by it self.

It has a name on the cone.

It help's people see when they drive at night time.

When road patrol do road patrol there's a cone that tells them how far the handle goes.

The cone keeps people on track at night.

You always see cones when there's road work!

2.

The clock is shaped like a circle.

It is shaped like a spaceship clock.

The hands move 60 s each minute.

All 3 hands move at the same time except one.

The clock is held by colourful pins.

                  

The clock is against the red wall.

3.

The scooter is dripping with water.

The scooter is soaked with water.

It has red and black grip tap.

It has an odi clip on next to the bars. 

It is a crisp scooter.

The scooter clamp is black and silver.

The scooter ball bearings have poped inside the wheels.  They make a creaking sound. 

The head seat is very strong.

Our value this term is Kindness.

Inquiry/reuse reduce recycle.

Our value this term is kindness.

science t-transpiration and the water cycle.

We put celery & science.