Play ground

In this story I worked on using interesting sentences with joiners and correct capitals and full stops.

I can smell the fresh air and feel the stony ground .  I see a con that looks like a hat.My feet are on the sand pit that is evrey soft.  I can see room 5 working very hard on a cheer.  There the bird's sing and her the bird make me shiving.  I feel the smooth flower and feel the hard ground.